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I’m crazy.
I can control things with my mind.
I know what you're thinking.
Don’t say it.
‘She’s crazy.’
Yes, I know. My mommy sent me to a doctor,
Said she was afraid for her safety.
She doesn’t say it,
But she thinks I’m crazy.
The doctor talked real soft,
Like he was afraid I’d break if he talked too loud.
He kept scribbling notes in his notebook.
Just like they do in the movies.
He thinks I’m crazy.
My boyfriend lives in KY, three states away.
I met him online.
I talk to him every night.
We plan on getting married.
My friends think I’m crazy.
At school I make all A’s.
I wear clothes no one else would be caught dead in.
I run down the halls screaming,
And make out with a new guy every week.
The freshmen think I’m crazy.
Everyone else knows it.
I was my grandma’s perfect child.
Always the little dream girl.
Until I showed up at her house and refused to go home.
Now she just thinks I’m crazy.
My aunt once told me I could always count on her.
Then she saw something
She didn’t want to believe.
A bisexual is not welcome in her family.
All my cousins think I’m crazy.
I got a job at a videogames store,
The youngest person there.
The manager makes fun of me
Because I laugh for no reason.
I guess I’m just crazy.
I can control things with my mind.
If you don’t believe me,
You can just drop dead.
…told ya.
©2004-2009 ~Heikou
:iconheikou:

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:iconwhitekitsune:
You know, this makes me think of those spells I get when I lock myself in my apartment all day and start to do things like eat then throw up then turn on the TV, computer and stereo all at the same time, as loud as I can without disturbing other people and then shutting everything off and screaming for silence. It pulls from me those bouts of loss of control and fear and panic, when everything feels hopeless. When you start to believe you can do anything because in reality you think you can do nothing.

Once again, the flow of the words is amazing, and the voice is unbelievably clear and powerful, in spite of the somewhat frantic spiralling thoughts.

I don't get the "...told ya." unfortunately. And perhaps it would be better to break the flow in that? Like:

"You can just drop dead.




...told ya."

Or something. ^^;
:iconheikou:
Yeah, it was more broken when it was in Word, but DA doesnt keep the same format when you copy and paste, so it kinda lost that. ^^; Thanks for hte comments, tho.

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